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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Please share with whoever you like Patris. I’d be most grateful. I’m thinking of writing a few things for the spoken rather than read word. It’s fun.

I’m so glad you liked it. I was surprised myself. Came back from a forest walk with the dog and recorded it in one go. Sometimes things sorta click :)

Thanks 🙏🏼

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Weston Parker's avatar

There are some great moments in there, got a strong stream of consciousness flow and a lot of energy. If I had to guess, I would say that took quite a while to write.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Well, the trite answer is it took a lifetime ;) But the reality is I got inspired with the prose and that took a day. The poem opening took longer because I struggle with the form of poetry.

I’m trying to mess with prose and write a kind of jazz version, where sometimes it flows, sometimes there’s flats and sharps, sometimes it’s rhythmic, sometimes not. I’m not even sure. And I’m trying to get more jazzy with the read too.

Onward I say. I’m looking forward to the next post now…what can I play with? How can I share emotion, experience, create mutual feeling?

Thanks Wes, seriously, thanks for your reading and being there frankly :)

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Weston Parker's avatar

This seems to be a good environment to try out new stuff.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Yeah, it really does (I’m guessing you mean Substack and not just life ;)

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Weston Parker's avatar

yup. Substack has real value though, especially in the quickness of the response, very helpful sometimes, to see if you hit a mark or missed it.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

I'm really taken with your enthusiasm for my favourite subject of love Jonathan, and your journey with the world on this. I embarrass myself with my intensity of expression at times, and notice the difference in shades of expression all round.

Imagine being able to ignite the ecstatic emotions in others through words alone...

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

And I've been listening/reading your gorgeous poems (swimming through the sea) and thank you, I love a writer that lands so perfectly as you do. It's such a pleasure.

I have nothing to say to you, I can't say anything but never be embarrassed, continue walking bare skinned, its brilliant.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Thanks Jonathan, a pleasure to connect and have this exchange.

I've no choice in this matter now, the words keep spilling out. I will share a really interesting quote below from a recent Substack exchange, that I feel you might enjoy...

Kierkegaard said that a poet is "An unhappy man who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music.... And people flock around the poet and say: 'Sing again soon'". It is the task of the artists to break open, to shatter, to explode, to turn it into a song, and to invite other to sing along.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

You’re right, I did enjoy…Oh that is inspiring and freeing in some way, a nod to the joy and honesty of melancholy (such a Scandinavian tilt too). Thanks, I shall ponder on this.

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Lor's avatar

Your words, thoughts and emotion, synchronized ,waiting for the timbre of your own instrument . A solo standout performance.

Well done.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

That’s a great way to put it, so I’ll keep that in mind for reading, like an instrument. Thank you Lor. A pat to Ranger. :)

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Lor's avatar

As usual, to prepare for your audio, I poured myself a cup of tea and, as usual, settled comfortably into the soft leather couch. Touched the audio button to listen and, after the first few lines ( you had me at “winter dawn”) , I thought oh no, he’s speaking too fast! Well, never noticed there was a speed choice !

Greatly relieved ,for me and for you, I started again.

Ranger sends a ‘wag’.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

The ability to speed up the audio is the weirdest addition. Each to their own and all but WHY would anyone utilise that capacity? So glad you got me at human speed :)

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Patris's avatar

Your voice is an instrument here. Playing the words like a soloist.

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Patris's avatar

What a Declaration, it IS a love poem, just as it stands. With shouted words that fly up in the air then fall on us like snow, covering our open eyes.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Your comments are like echos, bouncing my words and feelings and meaning back at me, but they’ve reverberated back through you, so they come back richer, changed, with messages I didn’t realise they contained. It is like a shouted snow storm, not so much jazz as a blustering wind of words, not so much rhythmic as a disturbance of the rhythm and meanings. Mmm, I’m going think about that.

Thank you Patris. Really fun. I will enjoy this thought process.

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Patris's avatar

You write with such passion here Jonathan - something that always makes words fly for me. Your meaning of course supersedes any interpretation I may express (as with the work of the other writers and poets I come here to read.)

Am saving it to listen to you read it later tonight when the house is quiet.

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Poetic Outlaws's avatar

Great stuff my friend!

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Thank you! I’m so glad you like it PO, I love your Substack, so thanks for that too :)

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

The power is not just in the pen or the writer but also in the ready reader.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

I'm slowly getting more comfortable in my reading skin :)

Thanks for your kind comment Stanley.

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Holly Starley's avatar

Beautiful reading, Jonathan! I’m so glad you shared.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Wait for the summer special ! Now that’s gonna be good ;)

👍🏼

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Karen E Sandberg's avatar

What a great love poem. I'll try to write more of them so I won't be a "hatchet poet writing sonnets"! Great lines, Jonathan.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Thanks Karen 🙏🏼

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Lor's avatar

“Can you not hear the love poems on the breeze? Can you not hear my voice calling in the morning mist”

For some reason, I rose too early this morning. With disheveled hair and sleepy eyes, I shuffled and stretched my way outside to the lake, pressing play as I stopped at the water’s edge. A love poem, like no other , slowly slipped across the cool waters becoming one with the morning fog.Together they rose in lazy spirals, up to meet the rising sun. Spreading love across the golden sky and music to my ears. It is going to be a beautiful day.

Thanks Jonathan! This one gave me the chills the first time. My absolute favorite narration of yours. Selfishly listening , as if it were just for me.

Have a most wonderful vacation. I hope campfires will be involved, along with the perfect marshmallow, according to the beholder of course, double decker s’mores, and many sticks and balls for The Dog.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

That's how to listen! In the early morning by the lake! How perfect. I was thinking when I wrote thisone, about the spread pf this dreadful politics and cold-heartedness thats spreading around the world, that we both know so well, Lor, so I love the rise in the second half where the poet decides to fioght on and never give up - "I will not capitulate. I will not be exhausted or regret or let go and I will whisper my love poems louder and louder. I will take you by the arms and shake you and shout my love poems into your face and shake you out of your stupor." - really suits this world right now and reminds me of our power :)

Thanks for the holiday wishes. We'll have a blast!

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Teyani Whitman's avatar

Thank you for this passion Jonathan.

And may the love you speak of sweep the valleys free of this dreadful hatred.

Light always wins over darkness.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

We shall overcome :) Thanks so much for reading Teyani, and commenting and giving me fuel to write on!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Since yesterday that I heard this I keep thinking what to write to you, Jonathan, but I can't find any words. I'm love-struck.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Ha ha, my love poems really are a kick in the head, a halo of love, a Ju-jitsu move 😂 I really like this one too.

Anyway, thanks so much Fontini. I actually noticed, whilst reading your Poem #24, that our writing shares a certain vague similarity sometimes, a kind of prose/poetry with a rhythm that comes in and out throughout. So I thought you might like this one. I'm so very honored you do :) Thanks.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

And I am awed by the fact you find similarities in our writing. I can't shake off my insecurity, not yet... but I'm working on it :) Still, I'm grateful for your words!

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Peter Todd's avatar

Oh my god, Johnathon.

So joyously written and read.

What a delight : )

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Thanks so much Peter! It’s such a boost to know these things are appreciated 🙏🏼 Glad you’ve found The Crow

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Diane’s Blue Forum 👩‍💻's avatar

Mesmerizing rhythm and thoughts, Jonathan. What you say about modern poets adding to the stream of chaos is too true. Your spoken version is powerful. Thanks, Paul W for recommending Jonathan.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Thanks Diane! It’s always such an honour when a new reader (listener) enjoys a piece. Regarding modern poets, I’m also making an analogy to today’s aggressive political and social landscape but addressing all that as if it were just poets. Poor poets, I hope no one think I’m blaming them 😂

Have you listened to the recording on A Lifeboat on the ocean of time? You might enjoy that too. Thanks again

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Diane’s Blue Forum 👩‍💻's avatar

I will check it out, Jonathan. Let me say that your reading places the reader in the same mood as a good romantic film. Awesome.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Wow, thanks Diane, that's great to hear.

Here's the link, I'd love to hear what you think :)

https://jonathanfostersthecrow.substack.com/p/a-lifeboat-on-the-ocean-of-time

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Troy Putney's avatar

This is beautiful and powerful, and I really appreciated your reading of it. It's so difficult to not fall into the anger, rage, and vitriol of this world, but the way toward a quieter, more peaceful life is through that love supreme -- from which all great poems, like this one, are born.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Thank you Troy. And you're right, through peace and kindness and paying real attention there is a chance we can resurrect the strength to abandon these vitriolic poets dominating the world and "once more we’ll set off a hurricane of love that will spin and spin until all this devastation is put back together again."

Thanks so much for your kind words.

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Lizzy Co (she/they)'s avatar

So grateful you chose to record this, hearing it read aloud took me on such an emotional journey. This piece builds like a damn symphony. There’s so much craft here. Amazing.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Thank you Lizzy. I’m really touched by you saying “craft”. I love the idea of craft, like carving wood or carving words has a brethren spirit. I want to be a craft merchant, dealing in small whittled journeys of words. Seriously, you’ve made my (so far, most lying grey) day. Thanks 🙏🏼

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Lizzy Co (she/they)'s avatar

“Whittled journeys of words” is completely delightful

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